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The window of our apartment is open
The city is full of noise

The mother on the floor below us is trying to calm her ever-yelling kids
The couple on the floor above us are fighting again

The noise is so obnoxious
It really kills the mood we've got going on

I can tell the feeling is fading by the look in your eyes
I know I have to do something now; I don't wanna lose this moment

I get up and shut the window
Suddenly all of the noise is gone

The childrens' screams have been reduced to nothing
The sounds of the city have been locked outside

We both take a breath
That's much better

I can see the desire return in your eyes
I switch the light off with a grin and make my way back to the bed

With a silent kiss
Our night begins
©2009 ~Cowgirl-Hank
:iconcowgirl-hank:

Author's Comments

It's so weird where I can get inspiration, and how easily it comes.

I was sitting in the lobby of the eye doctor in Costco today, waiting for my sister. Someone left the door open and all the noise was coming in. So, I reached over and shut the door. When I did, it all went quiet and the air was nice and cool, and suddenly this image popped into my head of a married couple in a noisy apartment, and the husband gets up to close the window, and it suddenly goes quiet and he grins....

And then I asked the secretary, "Do you have a piece of paper I can use?" And I jotted this down. I am pretty proud. It's not spectacular writing or anything, but I really enjoyed having one little tiny insignificant thing happen and this entire thing suddenly flooded into my brain. It was nice; like a writing high. :pills::lmao:

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:iconerisindigo:
YEAH FOR INSPIRATION!!!

Haha, I like it! It reminds me of a country song....Billy Currington anyone?:cowboy:
I like how the guy looks back and grins, I can just picture it!:D

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Our lives are defined by opportunities. Even the ones we miss. ~ Benjamin Button :heart:

In the moment when I truly understand my enemy, understand him well enough to defeat him, then in that very moment I also love him. ~ Ender Enders Game
:iconronaldoo05:
wow..really nice. :)
:iconabboz:
Aww I likey :) No popping pills tho missy! Writing highs are enough for you, dont turn into that emoticon!

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Abi xx

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:iconcowgirl-hank:
Thanks! And thanks for faving!! I haven't forgotten about your surprise ;) School takes up so much time now, though. Don't worry, I will finish it!!! :winner:

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I'm just proud that I can say
I don't wear this hat for show or fame

I'm a straight up no joking
Buck knife, gun toting
Give you the shirt off my back

No I'm not one of them posing pretty girls
I'm an every day all the way 100% cowgirl
:iconronaldoo05:
cool looking forward to it :) i wonder what it could be....lol
:iconcowgirl-hank:
I can't wait till you see it....You'll be sooo surprised....Maybe

--
I'm just proud that I can say
I don't wear this hat for show or fame

I'm a straight up no joking
Buck knife, gun toting
Give you the shirt off my back

No I'm not one of them posing pretty girls
I'm an every day all the way 100% cowgirl
:iconronaldoo05:
lol ...i know il love it because u made it for me...:) cant wait....
:iconcowgirl-hank:
i wouldnt be too sure about that.....

--
I'm just proud that I can say
I don't wear this hat for show or fame

I'm a straight up no joking
Buck knife, gun toting
Give you the shirt off my back

No I'm not one of them posing pretty girls
I'm an every day all the way 100% cowgirl

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